Solitaire (Lai)
Realisim ceases,Desolate pieces,Slipping,Bleary abrupt mind,Rainfall tears mark blind,Tick-TockDream forgotten speech,Numb troubled eyes reach,HauntedDejected hands act,Shuffling cards...
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I dunno about the style ~hugs~ but sure do love the voice and content Come Visit DreamLandHe Came ).out of. )no where .*)(.Always (.A Friend ...*`of the victim-.At the.*) .-.Slaughter.-. (*Of the......
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Oh my, Kaylee. You hadn't posted this on p&q, so this was my first time of reading it. But I've never heard of this style so I can't really tell you if you've done it right or not. But, I did like...
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Interesting form you have used here and somesad yet chilling images come to my mind. Not sureif the form is right but it sure does have an intensityof emotions.take care
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This style is also new to me but I do love the poem. Very well done missy!
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